- Throughout the film there are issues with the sound as it changes from the boom which followed the woman and the one which followed the man as they picked up different levels of background audio. To tackle this the edit required a wild track adding below the sound which would enhance the entire piece significantly.
- The shots chosen through the middle of the film are blurry, if this was tackled again the student should unlink the sound to the footage and then chose the best footage to use rather than swapping lots of blurry footage which will both confuse and aggravate the audience.
- The editor used the shot of the couple walking down the beach within the scene over the lines where the woman is asking the man whether he has any ambitions, this reflects to the audience that the woman is thinking about that ideal world and adds to the context of the situation as it has just been revealed that the man is an escort.
- The majority of the footage is following what the woman does within the scene, this is to establish that she is the main character and to build a relationship between the audience and the character.
This film was edited within the Adobe Premiere Pro Suite.